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Re: The Coward
It seems really sad. It's good though. You ok? -Rick
Oct 13, 2007 -
Re: See The World Spinning 'Round
It's a really good poem.
Oct 3, 2007 -
Re: I'm Gonna Laugh
Umm.....Wow are you ok? It's really good but are you wishing this on someone? *hugs* -Rick
Sep 23, 2007 -
Re: I'm a killer
*hugs* It's really good and really sad. P.S. You haven't killed everyone close to you, I'm well alive. And I'm always here for you. -Rick
Sep 21, 2007 -
Re: Rushed Relationships
This is really good, Linds. I liked the the lyrics used in each verse. Though, I think a chorus could go in it. :D
Sep 15, 2007 -
Re: jojln
What about explicit content? I'm a rapper and wanting to put some of my work on here.
Jul 24, 2007 -
Re: Esper’s Sepulchral I : Chapter 1: The Season of the Pikara
It's very nice so far. So much detail in the first chapter I'm looking forward to the rest of the novel. Keep up the good work
Jul 23, 2007 -
Re: Lost and Found
This is really short and not all that detailed. It seems like you're looking at the prespective view of soul-mates. Add more detail into it and show how they are ...
May 17, 2007 -
Re: Waiting...
I liked the ryhthm this poem carried out. Near the end the rythm dies. The poem is talking about waiting on certain things in life and giving up so easily. ...
May 14, 2007 -
Re: Sky Of Smoke (revised)
BRVO!!!!! I LUV IT...KEEP ME POSTED ON IDEAS :elephant:
Apr 10, 2007